M.Course+Reflection

When I wrote my first essay I was beyond weak on everything. My grammar was so bad I think my eight year sister had better writing skills then me. I had weak essays and really low grades. I feel like I have somewhat improve as a writer, but still need a little work. The things in my writing that was my biggest down fall was writing how I talk, grammar and so many fragments. I remember the first essay I wrote you said “I know you can write better than that “and every since then I have and feel like a much better writer since that essay. I also was in the habit of many contractions; I would say “couldn’t” and “don’t”. But now I revise my papers so I do not have that mistake. Another huge mistake I made often and you would leave comments about was saying” Be”. My teacher has taught me that it is not essay appropriate and it is not even proper English. I tried really hard this year to improve my writing skills and strive for that A. My teacher has also taught me run-on problems but I clearly needed help with that and also commas splice. My favorite papers this year was Theme for English 11 and also my SAT essay__.__ I enjoyed letting people see what I can do when it comes to poetry. My SAT was one of my favorites because I work on my own; no help for my teacher or anything and that prove now I can write an essay and be proud of it. When I wrote my theme for English 11 I told a story about how I am from the hood but I still love things a rich person does. It really took a lot out of me to express that feeling, because it is a true feeling from deep inside. My least favorite assignment was my narrative essay. I just lack effort when it came to that essay. I just really did not understand that essay and what I was supposed to do. I love trying to persuade people instead of telling a story. I know that sounds a little backwards because it is much easier to just make up a story then to try persuading someone. But I learned from it and now I would never make that mistake again. This school year I got to work on a new way of doing my work, on wiki space. I like wiki spaces because it keeps me more organized and it is much easier to keep you updated on your work. When I use wiki space I feel lucky, because half of my papers would be lost or messed up. I love wiki spaces.  But throughout this year I have became a better writer, I know I need a lot more practice so I can be that prefect writer I know I can be. My writing improve a lot, I learned many new things such as wiki space and how to spell some words. I want to say thank you to my lovely teacher Mrs.Symzack for taking time to help me with my writing and improving my proper English skills, I know it was hard and a headache sometimes.